Isalene,
Wow! It’s clear you’ve put so much effort and hard work into your essay. Your argument was already so strong, and now you’ve made it even more compelling and convincing. Your evidence supports your thinking perfectly, and I especially like how you included a student’s point of view– very effective. I am so proud of you!
Ms. Takacs
So proud of you Isalene for taking on the challenge and writing on a very controversial subject. I agree, put the phones down and pay attention. You go girl !!!
Good job, Isalene! I am so proud of you for persisting and working towards that 350-word limit!
Great work Isalene! I am very proud of you!
Great work Isalene! I agree, cellphones are very distracting to students (and adults). You have some great ideas in here!
Isalene,
Wow! It’s clear you’ve put so much effort and hard work into your essay. Your argument was already so strong, and now you’ve made it even more compelling and convincing. Your evidence supports your thinking perfectly, and I especially like how you included a student’s point of view– very effective. I am so proud of you!
Ms. Takacs
So proud of you Isalene for taking on the challenge and writing on a very controversial subject. I agree, put the phones down and pay attention. You go girl !!!